On Re-Watching First Cut:
Loads of shots that are the same - we have duplicated material
Some of the sound needs to be toned down
Add effects on the shots that are dreams – filters
Make it a lot shorter
Show more about the plot of the film – not enough info
Make dream / reality clear
Comments on audience feedback:
They were confused about the person in the bedroom – we are going to put filters on all the shots that are dreams so that this is obvious they are dreams and not real.
They said there was not enough info – by having a more shaped cut, it will help us distinguish the plot of the story clearer for the audience.
They said they could not tell who it was and the suspects – I was pleased with this as we want people to be unsure on who did the crime and to lead people on to the wrong suspect.
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