Second Rough Cut

After our audience feedback, we have produced another rough cut. This has changed from the first rough cut:

Individual clips have been cut right down

• Our shots have been re-ordered to add clarity
• We have tried a number of different ways of creating connections for the audience e.g. matches on dialogue ("You need to see someone" / next shot is in counsellor's room), graphic matches (little girl in dream tilts head to side / cut to mother's head coming into shot tilted on one side as calls upstairs), matches on theme (running / danger shots)
• We have cross-cut more with the dream sequence to make the connection between the older and younger girl clearer.